tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2181628818192889219.post6866937779463768725..comments2023-09-26T03:14:03.095-07:00Comments on Eikasia - A Web Novel: Chapter 1.3Illise Montoyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07340735083296412627noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2181628818192889219.post-29604432562064715512010-06-25T07:31:23.422-07:002010-06-25T07:31:23.422-07:00I love the last haircut remark :) It ties things ...I love the last haircut remark :) It ties things up rather nicely. Also, I love your style of writing in general! Your transition between the two characters' POVs was flawless, normally I find that it takes a little while to re-adjust to that specific character. Also, I like the fact that the story is fast paced, to prevent things from getting boring. All in all, I can't wait to readSamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2181628818192889219.post-24957583771103852502008-09-17T16:13:00.000-07:002008-09-17T16:13:00.000-07:00I'm interested to see where this goes! I rather l...I'm interested to see where this goes! I rather like your style, and Nyx's character--shapeshifters and wanderers are frequently written, but she has a nice touch of personality and bewilderment to her.<BR/><BR/>Two bits of (hopefully) constructive criticism: First, the details about the Ailurians and such seem a little forced, with the characters remarks and Nyx's inner dialogue almost Saeyrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16529641377218352170noreply@blogger.com